Promise Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Promise

Rating: 5.0


Promise me to be here
When I shed tear
For Your loving songs

Promise me to be here
When you hear
The sigh of the wind in the trees
By my side

Promise me to be here
When I need you to be near
Hug me tightly, oh my love

(2008/6/23)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 23 June 2008

Simply put but very evocative. Music, the Beloved, and Nature have all been included beautifully. Thanks, Nightingale.

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Hela Jug 23 June 2008

simple and beautiful

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Lucianne Fasolo 23 June 2008

I loved this one. It's simple, but heartfelt. I only think you could add an 'a' to the second verse, so it would be 'When I shed a tear'. Just a suggestion, though. Very nice work.

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~ Jon London ~ 23 June 2008

Nicely penned Persian my friend......keep'm coming '10

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Thad Wilk 23 June 2008

A promise sought that means - a lot! Very touching, a pleasure to read this poem! Best regards, *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Rema Prasanna 28 June 2008

Promise me to be here When I shed tear For Your loving songs........ It is so lovely... beautifully penned down poem.. Rgs Rema

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Kesav Easwaran 28 June 2008

promise...thrice...will be fullfilled...poem short and impressive

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Lynda Robson 25 June 2008

Touching and heart warming, to be needed is to be loved,10 again, Lynda xx

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... ... 24 June 2008

Beautiful, very touching Hun!

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Sarah Abdullah 24 June 2008

Touching and Warm Lovely Thx for sharing ^_^

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