Proxy Love. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Proxy Love.

Rating: 5.0

There is no
Substitute
For real Love,
No magic potion
That turns
Night into
Brilliant day.

Come what may,
Trying to find
A substitute
For real Love
Is time lost,
In every possible
Way.

Love,
A feeling
So unique
It can hardly be
Described with words!
For its hidden Victory
Resides,
In the force
That never lets
It die,
And in the lifelong
Course if follows,
That can never
Be denied.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 September 2024

What a beautiful and heartfelt poem of love. So true, there is no substitute for real love.Wonderful poetic expressions showing eternal love.

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D.N. Rebb 15 September 2024

Trying to find love's stand-in is just wasting time. There is only love. Great poem!

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 September 2024

Thanks for sharing Sandra x Top marks x

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Nabakishore Dash 15 September 2024

Excellent poem giving a very good message to proxy lovers.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 15 September 2024

Prevention is the greatest hazard that love faces. Real love for one another should come from the heart, such character should be there in the genes. Nice poem. Beautiful and powerful. Top score

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 September 2024

' Love can hardly be described in words.... For its hidden victory resides, in the force that never lets it die' amazing lines from a great poem. To my favorites.

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