Rain Poem by Sandra Martyres

Rain

Rating: 5.0


The skies are overcast
But will the clouds last?
Or will they slide across the sky
And simply pass us by
To settle over another village or town?
Our land is parched and brown
The cattle are lean and hungry
The wells are empty
The village is almost deserted
The villagers have started moving away
No longer can they stay thirsty.
But I see the skies are getting darker
I can feel raindrops
Am I imagining?
No it is truly the rain
I see the drops sliding
Down my window pane.
I smell the delicious smell
Of wet earth
All will soon be well.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 09 April 2009

hopes and expectations...these are the leading lights in life...a theme well conceived artfully told...10

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Pablo Cruise 08 April 2009

A wonder in your words, Sandra. The 'raindrop' a desire to many. Very nice

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 08 April 2009

Patience, observation and acceptance fulfills a desire. 'Rain' says this. As if communicating with nature. And nature delivers what is wished. This is an interesting poem on several levels of thought. Congratulations. A nice write, Sandra.

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Fiona Davidson 08 April 2009

Excellent write Sandra...and yes it is one of the things we can't live without...10

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Meggie Gultiano 08 April 2009

the last stanza speaks of volume..of positive and expectant heart and hope. Thank you for this wonderful message of hope

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Siddharth Singh 19 July 2009

ah! exceptional, what a heartwarming poem? full of hope and fulfillment.

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Sonya Florentino 07 July 2009

i love the anticipation in this, and the relief in the end that indeed the rain has come... beautiful and touching...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

Wonderful soft poem with hope and aspiration.

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Surayya Abbas 22 April 2009

Thanks for positive and hopeful message.

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Yelena M. 14 April 2009

Amazing poem bringing forth the purifying power of rain and delivering hope into the darkest corners of the heart.Thank you, Sandra.10+++... Best wishes. A.

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