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Rain

Rating: 4.6

Atomized ocean, sun powered, airlifted,
With thunder and lightning, breaks
Eternal silence of infinite space.
Unknown what is it holding when it falls, yet
Blessed from above despite unclear sky,
As if immensity taps at our life
Either as celestial shower of mercy

Or world wide waterfalls of existence
Emptying itself on what the world survives-

Failed or excess, all is derailed.
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Anand Madhukar 14 September 2009

An excellent piece, words woven with infinite care, a pleasure to read.

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 September 2009

'Free its service, humanity its faith, Ever bent to put on level with heaven' Well said. Beautiful poem Enjoyed reading it

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Asma Khan 03 September 2009

Free its service, universal humanity its faith, Superb words with good flow.

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The Understander 29 August 2009

I really like this one, keep up the good work Yoonoos

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Seema Aarella 19 August 2009

A different view...creativity at its best!

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Tom Allport 16 April 2020

The life blood of mother Earth

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Timbuktoo 29 December 2019

Monsoons....... I love it, your just getting better with ever line and verse.

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Srijani Mahanta 27 July 2019

Immensely beautiful lines on rain.A glamorous version of rain.A big 10+++++++.Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant poetry with all of us.

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Anjandev Roy 25 June 2019

Eternal silence of infinite space.......wonderful expression.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 February 2019

Rains are the best gift to our earth by the loving sky.

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