Rain Poem by yoonoos peerbocus


Rating: 4.6

Atomized ocean, sun powered, airlifted,
With thunder and lightning, breaks
Eternal silence of infinite space.
Unknown what is it holding when it falls, yet
Blessed from above despite unclear sky,
As if immensity taps at our life
Either as celestial shower of mercy

Or world wide waterfalls of existence
Emptying itself on what the world survives-
Failed or excess, all is derailed.
What's by birth creation whole, unique taste,
Free its service, humanity its faith,
Ever bent to put on level with heaven

Man's earth turned desire.

Sally Plumb Plumb 16 March 2010

waterfalls of existance took my fancy.Try 'Storm' if time permits. regards O great one.

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Anita Trivedi 14 May 2010

proper words, proper flow, proper place. very wel writen

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Derek Non Giving 07 July 2010

A very beautiful poem (:

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Bozhidar Pangelov 04 August 2010

Man's earth turned desire. celestial shower of mercy rain speak with you

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Marieta Maglas 09 August 2010

Beautiful poem, I am highly happy to go through yours high thoughts

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Tom Allport 16 April 2020

The life blood of mother Earth

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Timbuktoo 29 December 2019

Monsoons....... I love it, your just getting better with ever line and verse.

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Srijani Mahanta 27 July 2019

Immensely beautiful lines on rain.A glamorous version of rain.A big 10+++++++.Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant poetry with all of us.

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Anjandev Roy 25 June 2019

Eternal silence of infinite space.......wonderful expression.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 February 2019

Rains are the best gift to our earth by the loving sky.

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