It's been raining for so long, as the
storms roll on. Lightning flashes, then
is gone. Winds roar, then hums along.
Trees bend, then stand strong. Darkness
comes, but then the brightness, of the
dawn. Life sings it's course's, but we
all belong. In and, a part of Gods song.
A very well expressed poem. Wonderful poetic expressions with stunning images.
Darkness and sadness are just ephemeral. In our sorrows, we will be comforted by God Almighty. A very uplifting poem that soothes the spirit.
Thank you very much! .. Edward, For such a beautifully kind reply! .. Ever so many blessings! ..
It's been raining for so long, as the storms roll on. Lightning flashes, then is gone. Winds roar, then hums along. Trees bend, then stand strong. Darkness comes, but then the brightness, of the dawn. Life sings it's coure's, but we all belong. In and, a part of Gods song. - - - -Wow- - Your poem has the power to bring light in the darkness.Thank you dear Rebecca for sharing such wonderful poem.
Thank you! .. Bharati, For such a heartwarming and encouraging reply! .. With ever such beauty and heart your poetry flows, and ever such warm sentiments for the reader to hold! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..
The rain really bring blossoms. Great rhyming scheme and choice of words, marvelously penned! 10.
Thank you! .. Irfanulla, For such a beautifully kind reply! .. I look forward to visiting your page! .. Ever so many blessings! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Becca, Very profound write. I was reminded of “Old Man And the Sea” by Hemingway. Rain brings comfort and happiness and arourses our carnal desires, as I have mentioned in my series, Monsoon Musings. But it brings horrors and fear as you have shown too.
Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For your very kind and beautiful reply! .. Your poetry like a river has such power and flow, with each poem, with each story, such deep heart and beauty unfolds! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..