Rains Won't Stay Poem by Rebecca Navarre
Rains Won't Stay
See as time, drifts away.
Standing out in, the meadows,
watch it fade. As skies turn,
from purple, to a darker shade,
of gray. But, know behind it, a
silver lining lay. Somethings, , ,
like that, , , always, remain.
Because God Promised, in tomorrow.
For each, he holds a new day. Even
if it feels, , , each has been the same...
Know, one day, the rains won't stay.
Another well thought out poem about life and hope and tribulations and God. You are obviously not afraid to take on the big topics! ! ! And you do it in such a gentle-spoken way that draws your reader in instead of chasing him away. Well done. 10's abound
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I like the way you fold Eternal Truth into the fabric of Time, so Time itself partakes of God's larger existence and we can get a glimpse of what is promised to us. I will not be terrestrial land people fight over, or worldly power which will corrupt them. It will be an appreciation of the Earth, her beauty which foreshadows Heaven. Your closing passage about a special gift God will give each believer is a wonderful hope. In fact, your poem expresses HOPE throughout!
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Know, one day, the rains won't stay.........concrete aspect of the poem! Brilliantly summed up....Top score!