The tiniest raindrop. That I ever saw,
clinging to a blade of green, grass so
small. Gently shimmering in the wind...
Nearly invisible, to all. Until the suns
light touches it just so, like a prism,
crystal ball. And the mystic of life's,
call...
Stunning! Lovely how you captured this tiny raindrop, Rebecca. A poet with an eye for beauty in the simplest and smallest things.
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The subject is so small, delicate but what make it big? your observation, words and gentle heart...that magnify nature beauty to its style, classy.
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Hi Becca, Exquisite insight into the beauty of nature, definitely. On a peripheral view. On the first reading. But, totally different poem, different theme, on further reading. Encouraging to read again and again.... I find the poem reflective of Indian philosophy. It is the presence of God in one's heart that makes one complete, glowing with the inner beauty. Without His presence, we human beings are like the un-noticably tiny rain-drop. With no life of its own. Marvelous write Enjoyed reading. A fullest 100. And onto mypoemslist. Thank you Becca. And All The Best....
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful poem and ending but not really an ending as the mystic of life's call continues this poem as our lives continue immersed and surrounded by the beauty and wonder of nature. A stunning, deeply reflective poem!
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