Random Thoughts Poem by Ntsako Manhisa

Ntsako Manhisa

Ntsako Manhisa

Grasmere, Mountain View, Gauteng, South Africa.

Random Thoughts

Rating: 4.5


Bored out of my mind
I search for a new hobby
I broke both my legs

Writing a Haiku
Needs seventeen syllables
I am short with five

Timing is crucial
Being too late or too early
Can cause you trouble

No I don't believe
She wouldn't do that to me
She truly loves me

Thursday, September 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: boredom,haiku,random thoughts,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 13 October 2018

Martin, such a magnificent poem of the day.... Congrats for being chosen....10+++++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

A poem on random thought has been amazingly delineated. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Savita Tyagi 13 October 2018

Yes random thoughts can be interesting. I have a whole series of poems that bloomed under random thoughts. Your poem just reminded me of it.

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Tom Allport 13 October 2018

A clever write Martin of 68 combinations? Written clearly for us!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 October 2018

Out of my mind! ! Living on Earth! Learning always. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 October 2019

Haiku, a lovely set of four, random thoughts' random harvest.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 October 2019

Random thoughts roaming in the mind beautifully unfolded. A well deserved modern poem of the day.

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Adeeb Alfateh 13 October 2019

Timing is crucial Being too late or too early Can cause you trouble great writing great 10++

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Kim Barney 13 October 2019

Very nice haiku congrats on your selection poem of the day

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James McLain ?? 13 October 2019

Quick paced quick moving poem. Thank you for sharing. James McLain 🎸

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Ntsako Manhisa

Ntsako Manhisa

Grasmere, Mountain View, Gauteng, South Africa.
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