Rays Of Your Smile Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Rays Of Your Smile

Rating: 5.0

No birds croon
At the door of dawn
For coldness swallows
The silhouettes of trees
A mist is stretching out
In search of meanings
Answers are secret
Scrawls of destiny
I wish to hear the songs
Amid the silence of paths
Cold hands need rays
Of your smile.

Dr Dillip K Swain 04 December 2022

Beautifully penned. Not exaggerating, your poetry needs due appreciation.

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A marvellous poem on a dawn in winter. Yes. It is December and it is winter. Cold and grey are the morns. Sun hides in and out of the house. Nice Nosheen

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 December 2022

A true sweet and touching poem, dear Nosheen, heartwarming and your words full of wisdom makes the reader starts to think deeper. An excellent poem for still to ponder about.5 Stars Full Score and to my Favourites

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Kim Barney 05 December 2022

Very nice, Nosheen!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 December 2022

I totally agree with David and Dillip Bravo!

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David Wood 05 December 2022

Excellent poem, should be Poem of the Day.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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