Rebirth Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Rebirth

Rating: 5.0


A sky luminous with stars
The trees dancing
The breeze
Cooled by the lake
On the earth's skirt
I see you
In the dawn dew
It makes me awake

The scent of your presence
The green grass after rain
In every moment of life
In each space of time
The warmth
The light
Inside Me
Rebirth
Again

(2008/10/7)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan Macli Borges 07 October 2008

beautiful wrinting, well placed words... one more 10...

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Evaughn Gray 07 October 2008

this was a really nice poem.. very inviting, sweet, light, lovely, it was honest.. ~Hazel G.E

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C T Heart 08 October 2008

awesome piece...a 10 for you as always.

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Jessica Munez 08 October 2008

while i was reading it i felt like i was there

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Sandra Fowler 08 October 2008

Simple, but effective. Lovely poem. Kind regards, Sandra

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Great Poem. Well written!

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Cherry Zhai 14 October 2008

Life is very beautiful under your pen, so is in your heart.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 October 2008

a very good interpretation........I liked it.

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Cathleen Hodgkinson 09 October 2008

An exquisite poem! Very thought provoking with truth in the message.-Cathy

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M M 08 October 2008

A lovely poem, through which whispers the wind of changes, consciousness, which gives the readers a wise message. Rebirth is possible...

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