Per. Nig.


Rebirth - Poem by Per. Nig.

A sky luminous with stars
The trees dancing
The breeze
Cooled by the lake
On the earth's skirt
I see you
In the dawn dew
It makes me awake

The scent of your presence
The green grass after rain
In every moment of life
In each space of time
The warmth
The light
Inside Me
Rebirth
Again

(2008/10/7)


Comments about Rebirth by Per. Nig.

  • (11/20/2008 8:45:00 PM)

    Great Poem. Well written! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/14/2008 5:14:00 AM)

    Life is very beautiful under your pen, so is in your heart. (Report)Reply

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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (10/11/2008 11:49:00 AM)

    a very good interpretation........I liked it. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/9/2008 11:38:00 PM)

    An exquisite poem! Very thought provoking with truth in the message.-Cathy (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2008 12:32:00 PM)

    A lovely poem, through which whispers the wind of changes, consciousness, which gives the readers a wise message. Rebirth is possible... (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2008 11:27:00 AM)

    This is truly lovely! Thanks! (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2008 10:53:00 AM)

    feels warm...to rebirth... (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2008 9:20:00 AM)

    Each line of your pen is a 'rebirth' in itself. Great job here :)

    Let the ink flow! Blessings, Sandi
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/8/2008 8:45:00 AM)

    'In every moment of life
    In each space of time
    The warmth
    The light
    Inside Me
    Rebirth
    Again'

    10 for this excellent poem.
    Love it.
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (10/8/2008 3:58:00 AM)

    oh lovely! ! new taste! .........10++ (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2008 3:48:00 AM)

    Simple, but effective. Lovely poem.

    Kind regards,

    Sandra
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  • (10/8/2008 3:10:00 AM)

    while i was reading it i felt like i was there (Report)Reply

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  • (10/8/2008 3:02:00 AM)

    awesome piece...a 10 for you as always. (Report)Reply

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  • Evaughn Gray (10/7/2008 11:52:00 PM)

    this was a really nice poem.. very inviting, sweet, light, lovely, it was honest.. ~Hazel G.E (Report)Reply

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  • Allan Macli Borges (10/7/2008 11:47:00 PM)

    beautiful wrinting, well placed words... one more 10... (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2008 11:15:00 PM)

    amir theres so much warmth in
    your poem --i like this
    'The warmth
    The light
    Inside Me
    Rebirth
    Again'
    ++10 regards anjali
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  • (10/7/2008 9:11:00 PM)

    the scent of your presence........... excellent composition. i hope everyone will have some one special who can give us the courage to survive in life. (Report)Reply

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  • Ershad Mazumder (10/7/2008 8:58:00 PM)

    Super excellant. This is the poem I always look for. Keep on writinf dear PN (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2008 8:39:00 PM)

    A splendid write Shiraz! She brings a rebirth to you
    And makes your whole world - seem new! ! *10*! !
    Best wishes! !
    Friend Thad
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  • (10/7/2008 8:08:00 PM)

    Lovely poem.I envy you as I wish I'd written this one.very nice images and I gave you a ten. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2008


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