Life has moved forward,
Time turned to five seasons,
But I stand here still.
Here in this old attic,
With this half torn,
Yellow page from my diary,
Held in my heart!
Letters scrambled, yet!
Has a shade of a golden ink,
Over the edge of
Old blank inkpen's vomit,
Spread into million dots!
By tears fallen from eyes!
But now I share a laugh,
With that unrealistic,
First ever poem of mine!
The clash of faith,
And unknown reasons to end!
Mistakes are bound to happen
Aren't they?
In the flames of passion,
I am burning it now,
Let it light my thoughts,
Let it show way,
To a new write,
May be a better one!
Yet a blue spark came from it,
And I heard a small cry!
After all, It was alive!
Once!
I loved reading this poem with amazing lines written with deep emotions about past times! Brilliant write!
I am burning it now, Let it light my thoughts Your thoughts now as bright as needed. You delivered a good poem. Thank you.
The idea is original, and the way you express you new days and dream also very nice one...we shall dance for new awakening..recovery! _Soul
Life moves on with optimistic thoughts but we still remember our olden days....superb poem with a message.
past are like shadows of our life bcoz light flows over it. a beautiful ink searching to flow in your thoughts.
you have pulled a beautiful poem from your magic box. we all recover from the first poem my do we ever. But there is many more to come in the future. keep writing you are very talented. (and I love your name)
Times ahead have to make the amends and certainly there is a recovery awaiting.. An engrossing poem of the kind, dear Aswath.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
My dear Honorable Poet Magic Box seems to me that you have worked a miracle (no magic) with this brilliantly written poem of optimism. This has really light up my life and makes me want to just keeping on making giant steps. You have written a very encouraging poem (smile) on Recovery. It can be painful but well worth the effort in the end. Inspiring and very well crafted.