Recovery Poem by Magic Box

Recovery

Rating: 5.0


Life has moved forward,
Time turned to five seasons,
But I stand here still.

Here in this old attic,
With this half torn,
Yellow page from my diary,
Held in my heart!

Letters scrambled, yet!
Has a shade of a golden ink,
Over the edge of
Old blank inkpen's vomit,
Spread into million dots!
By tears fallen from eyes!

But now I share a laugh,
With that unrealistic,
First ever poem of mine!

The clash of faith,
And unknown reasons to end!
Mistakes are bound to happen
Aren't they?

In the flames of passion,
I am burning it now,
Let it light my thoughts,
Let it show way,
To a new write,
May be a better one!

Yet a blue spark came from it,
And I heard a small cry!
After all, It was alive!

Once!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Recovery after a fall
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucifera Santez 18 August 2013

Yet a blue spark came from it, And I heard a small cry! After all, It was alive! Once! loved it. please read some of mine. :)

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Passionate Reader 18 August 2013

Yes life has to move forward. A great message in this poem and i really liked the optimistic approach! ! ! :)))

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Kavya . 19 August 2013

oh so finally the past is buried for good looking for a brigher present and future, , , , a gud write aswath

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 19 August 2013

The emotion well presented. I love this poem.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 19 August 2013

beautiful..! ! so touched and inspiring it should be life, there is always a time for recovery great thought and very good written

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Ramesh Rai 26 August 2013

past are like shadows of our life bcoz light flows over it. a beautiful ink searching to flow in your thoughts.

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Nikita Dutt 24 August 2013

A really nice write!

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Heather Wilkins 20 August 2013

you have pulled a beautiful poem from your magic box. we all recover from the first poem my do we ever. But there is many more to come in the future. keep writing you are very talented. (and I love your name)

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Dinesan Madathil 20 August 2013

Times ahead have to make the amends and certainly there is a recovery awaiting.. An engrossing poem of the kind, dear Aswath.

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Neela Nath Das 20 August 2013

Loved the image of blue spark.A note of optimism!

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