~ RECYCLING ~ [New Year Bouquet ~ niv]
Ms. Nivedita
UK
30 December 2009.
Our bodies are
Recycled five Primordial Elements.
Our Microcosms are
Recycled fragments of Macrocosm.
Our body humors are
Recycled ‘Original Sap’
Our breaths are
Recycled zephyrs.
Our phonations are
Recycled Archie Euphony OM.
Our beauties are
Recycled fineries of mind.
Our colors are
Recycled VIBGYOR.
Our thoughts are
Recycled informations.
Our emotions are
Recycled imaginations.
Our actions are
Recycled inclinations.
Our knowledges are
Recycled reflective ‘Wisdom’.
Our hates are
Recycled self devaluations.
Our loves are
Recycled ‘Supreme Love’.
Our beneficences are
Recycled Sattva Gunas’.
Our energies are
Recycled ‘Omni Energy’.
Our workholisms are
Recycled ‘Rajas Gunas’.
Our sorrows are
Recycled ungratifications.
Our egotisms are
Recycled myopic self.
Our greeds are
Recycled void feelings.
Our fury and funks are
Recycled ‘Tamas Gunas’.
Our raptures are
Recycled spark of ‘Bliss’.
Our rebirths are.
Recycling of ‘Jiva-Atmans’.
Our ‘Jiva-Atmans’ are
Recycled minuscule of ‘Param Atman’.
All our recyclings are
Recycled obliviousness of
Our innate ‘Scendlessness’.
Glossary:
OM: The basis of all sounds, universal ‘symbol-word’ for God. -Veda
Gunas: Three attributes of Nature
Sattva: Expansion, Intelligence, Wisdom.
Rajas: Activity, Energy, Struggle.
Tamas: Obstruction, Mass, Ignorance, Inertia.
Atman: The Divine within the self.
Param Atman: Suprememe ‘Self’, All Highest, Secondless.
Jiva-Atmans: Supreme ‘Self’ in miniscule ‘self’.
After reading your poem, I feel as though I can be recycled and probably would turn out better. A very discriptive and interesting approach to several matters. Good Write.
All our recyclings are Recycled obliviousness of Our innate ‘Scendlessness................. Wonderful I This is the pivot point of this poem.Even we do not read the rest of this poem, we have nothing to lose...Thanks Dear Niv
Wow! What a Caption! ! Now the contents: Every word is with diamond studded meaning still a few to discuss as my understanding in Wisdom and poetic hierarchical order [1] All our recyclings are/Recycled obliviousness of/Our innate ‘Scendlessness’. [2] Our knowledges are/Recycled reflective ‘Wisdom’ [3] Our raptures are/Recycled spark of ‘Bliss’ [4] Our loves are/Recycled ‘Supreme Love’. [5] Our ‘Jiva-Atmans’ are/Recycled minuscule of ‘Param Atman’. Finally it is needless to say all are [in this poem] distilled and concise Vedic sayings… so far I've read Thanks for such a poem of penta [or more] spectrum poem 10++++
Unique Umbrellaisation…and canvas is Vast and... Glossary is very much helpful for getting acquainted with Vedic wisdom… Finish is highest Vedantic wisdom Non-Dualism ‘Scendlessness’ …I’m Thou … or I’m That [in uppercase] All our recycling are/Recycled obliviousness of/Our innate ‘Scendlessness’. The Name of the poem bears a new dimension… Thanks Ma’am for such a great poem… 10+++
My mother would always tell me, 'There is nothing new under the sky' If she sees this she would say, 'I told you didn't I? ' well done
this reminds me of a story about a gold tried in the fire.... like a diamond on a black cloth... anyway, nice write as always
Good poetic demonstration of Indian classical philosophy in contemporary times. Hypothetical study of human brain-war between reality and unreal, between light and dark, between death and eternity. Furniture is gorgeously engraved with pearls and diamonds of etheral conceptions, so it will be very ecstatic to use a living furniture which is uplifted mentally from its material root. That is the realized human being who attains such truth by heart. Sometimes supreme uses it and sometimes the ignorant part of supreme (unrealized individual) . Thank you much for offering such beauty. One thing perhaps you have missed to mention......all such poems are the recycled poems of ancestors........ Enjoyed. Regards, 10++++ pranab
We must be constantly recycling ourselves. Food for thought.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Our body as you say has a recycling mechanism with which it survives life long.