The night I saw
My reflection
In the mirror
I almost died
So damn worn out
Can't go too far
What went so wrong?
I've tried 3x to leave replies for Nosheen and Bharati. Can PH please help out. THX so very much.
That's what happens to all of us at times. Life wears us out. I'd feel the same looking into the mirror unless I have tons of makeup on.
Nosheen, inner beauty is what's most important. And yours shines so brilliantly in all of your poetry.
Mirrors only reflects outside look.Look into the eyes of loving people.There are so many who will say how graceful you look..
Thank You for such a wonderful compliment, Bharati! The feeling is mutual!
Stay away from mirrors, Richard! I get a fright every time I look in one!
Kim, only you could come up with such a great funny response to this poem. Absolutely love it! Still laughing...and will be for some time! Many THX for making my day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Memento mori! A mirror can be so...calculating. Brilliant verse, Richard. To myfavourites.
Here's to Socrates...and immortality! Love your comments on this one, M.J.! THX so much for adding it to your favourites.