Reflective Romance Poem by Jaleel Perinjanam

Reflective Romance

Rating: 5.0


Dear, you learn by mind
Memoirs of yesterdays
Dear, know me again
I’m still loving you

April 1, your birthday
I can’t surpass that day
Even after several years
Rewind recall your worth

Whenever enfold me
Solicited deep kiss
Obvious your sparkling eyes
Pleaded for the passion

You are my marvel
Reflective romance
I can’t flight any more
My first love, my sweet love

So zeal your smell
So nice your tone
So lovely your heart
So nurture your feel

Wherever you are
I’m sure you join me
I wish for call you to
Upcoming world of love

Dear, you learn by heart
Memoirs of yesterdays
Wait on reflective romance
I still be devoted to you

(Riyadh,20 June 2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

poem seems so tender with true words from one's heart.. nice..

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Nooruddeen Mm 23 June 2009

Very sincere and delicate. These words were gathered up directly from the heart. Occasionally I recollect those words from my piece of work (Photos Speak) “Oh! My Girl, you have never been a girl In my forgotten corner of mind, thus far, You are with me, as the shadow of mine Wherever I am Ever since you walked off To reunite in our next birth…..” Good work, we expect more Thank you for sharing Nooruddeen

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Rubas Kutty 24 June 2009

Great work. It's nicer the way you have spun the web from the mind to heart. The 'reflective' might have tilted the scales to the 'mind' though. 10/10 for the sheer intensity of everlasting nostalgic love. Expecting more from the arsenal where it came! !

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rago rago 28 June 2009

nice work and so tender and the words too reflective as your caption...... well done Sir, ......pls see my 10>.........

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Naidz Ladia 28 June 2009

i could not write anything except this is ''beautiful'..naizz

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Zeinab Sherif 19 July 2009

A perfect poem this one.it deserves10++++

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Seema Aarella 05 July 2009

Passionate whispers in the loved ones ears, so dauntless and confident a lover feels when blessed with the girl of his love.......nice feelings, nice poem! ! ! !

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Sandhya S N 02 July 2009

Dear, Lovely written words form your heart It is true that no one can ever forget one's first love sandhya

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Priyanka Bhowmick 01 July 2009

a touching piece.. shades of true love.. lovely penned.

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Shilpa Luthra 01 July 2009

I m speechless. i just almost cried.....so touching. so real.... m so glad to read ur poem. Good Job...

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