Rejection Poem by Susan Williams

Rejection

Rating: ★5.0


Rejection is pain
pure and simple
impure and complicated
doesn't matter
rejection is pain
and nobody on earth is exempt from it
and I doubt there is any relief from the hurt
except the passage of time and the pen in a poet's hand.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~copyright 2019 Susan Williams

Monday, May 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: complicated,pain,rejection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 24 May 2019

Hi Susan, Rejection, of course, inflicts the gravest of pains, absolutely. Very well said. And nobody is exempt from the pain of rejection. Not even gods. Any number of examples in the myths... And your discovery makes the icing on the cake: “I doubt there is any relief from the hurt Except passage of time and the poet’s pen”... Wonderful... a bouquet of tens...

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Susan Williams 06 October 2019

You deserve a bouquet of friendship flowers!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2019

A fabulous poem! I greatly admire and appreciate the underlying philosophy.................................10

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Susan Williams 31 May 2019

Thank you, I appreciate your encouraging words

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Susan Williams 31 May 2019

very much. You are very kind

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

Part Two- -I was talking about the heart being rejected by a lover or a friend or a family member- - it is a soul-damaging thing to happen, damning if happens over and over and over. The best salve is that found in forgiveness. Thank you my friend, I will come to you for more comforting words if my books get the thumbs down! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 21 September 2020

Part One- - Soran, I wasn't talking about that horrid kind of rejection! ! ! I haven't reached the point of finding an agent and waiting for the rejections slips... but the series will be published I tell myself.

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Soran M. H 17 September 2020

Do not worry, maybe publishing houses look at your novel from a profit or commercial perspective, and this is not evidence of its badness. I hope to see your name among international novelists.

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Susan Williams 14 September 2020

Thank you for liking my conclusion, Anjandev! ! ! It beats what some heartbroken people turn to! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 10 September 2020

Wisely written......great conclusion......thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.

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