Residential Presidential Bully Bully- - - (A Haynaku) Poem by Susan Williams

Residential Presidential Bully Bully- - - (A Haynaku)

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scowly face
nasty hectoring voice
~~~~~~~~©2018 Susan Williams

Friday, May 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: bullying
Kumarmani Mahakul demonstrated a Haynaku, a type of poetry I did not know about. In a traditional Haynaku there are three lines. In the 1st line there is one word, there are two words in the 2nd line, and three words in the 3rd line. There is no restrictions on syllables or stresses or rhymes. So here's my first attempt.
Valsa George 22 March 2020

Bullies are generally mean with a scowly face. They are altogether nasty! Your first attempt at Haynaku is indeed a great success. I haven't attempted it so far. In fact only recently I got familiar with such a poetic form!

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Susan Williams 08 April 2020

Thank you! I had fun with this style and I had fun with barking and growling at that certain bully

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 January 2020

Identification! Free mind! ! ! Freedom of speech. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 08 April 2020

Yes! Thank goodness America has freedom of speech or I'd be put in his jail!

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 March 2019

it's great expression with 6 words

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Susan Williams 21 March 2019

Again PH is not letting me post replies quickly- in fact. I have to spend 10 minutes trying to get it written down in box and then another 5 minutes getting my reply submitted. Please know I appreciate your comment and that it helps me see when and where I connect with reader. Thank you! !

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Richard Wlodarski 02 July 2018

Wow! In merely 6 words, you've summed up a real powerful bully. And you've done it in this ingenious style of poetry. And when I saw the title, I immediately thought of that fun song, which I've sung at karaoke. Great job, Susan.

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Susan Williams 04 July 2018

Thank you, Richard! Had fun with that title and this style of poem. If I may presume, I would like you to read Residential Presidential Bully Bully- Mirror Image. I think I prefer the Ripple Mirror Haynaku- -it is even more demanding!

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 June 2018

Short and sweet write Susan. Loved it.

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Susan Williams 21 June 2018

Short for sure! ! ! Hopefully not sweet! ! ! ! I hope you try the Ripple Mirror Haynaku- I think you've got the quickness of mind to handle it- I had to struggle with it! Thank you for reading my stuff, Geetha! ! ! You should get a medal of honor for doing so! ! ! !

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