Religion is irrelevant
If it isn't part of social fabric.
Spirituality is irrelevant
If it is not conscious of unifying principle of Universe.
God is irrelevant
If we can't feel Its influence upon our life.
i appreciate reflections, but don't think i'd use irrelevant here. but it is her thoughts & poem! [from Google]: ir·rel·e·vant adjective..... not connected with or relevant to something. synonyms: beside the point, immaterial, not pertinent, not germane, off the subject, unconnected, unrelated, peripheral, extraneous, inapposite, inapplicable; unimportant, inconsequential, insignificant, trivial; off-topic; formal impertinent.. (to continue) ..
(continued) ..MAYBE I'd use something like widely-effective? but, as each person...[unless they are total 'hermits', with NO effect on the rest of Humanity]...has at least a tiny effect on 'society', for good OR bad, i believe the religion, spirituality, and God of any individual IS relevant albeit at times 'not very relevant' to 'society'! ! ;) BUT one, two, or three of R, S, and G may be immensely relevant TO THE INDIVIDUAL. (continued) ..
ok, i changed my mind. i won't correct It's to Its unless you ask me to. i'll leave a Bri's Note, however, telling readers It's should be Its. i've done the same for RoseAnn V. Shawiak's poem in the showcase. :) bri
it's going into May's showcase, but with It's changed to Its. but i THOUGHT I SENT TO YOU, TODAY, a note to that effect. i don't see it now! ? ? ? bri :) thanks.
A thought provoking poem. I also share your views. After all, these were created to take us to a higher dimension of life.
(continued) .. i like and respect Savita as a PH friend and poet. she has offered this poem for my use in my usually-monthly showcase of PH poets' poems, most of which i now get from MyPoemList, ....which is where i shall now send this poem. ha ha. and i think May shall see it again 'elsewhere'. thanks. bri :) [NOT cont.]
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
God is irrelevant If we can't feel It's influence upon our life........yes, so true. It is beautiful poem on spirituality and religion astutely presented. Thanks.10