Residential Presidential Bully Bully In A Mirror- - - (A Rippled Mirror Haynaku) Poem by Susan Williams
Residential Presidential Bully Bully In A Mirror- - - (A Rippled Mirror Haynaku)
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mean
scowly face
nasty hectoring voice
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voice hectoring nastiness
face scowling
meanness
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~©2018 Susan Williams
Oh my sides are hurting! ! ! Hahahahahahahahahaha==oh my word- I mean your word! ! ! Great comment to place under a photo of the orange face.
Bullying seen all over the world! ! ! Mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Interesting. I have never tried it. The word effect certainly bears a lot of weight.
Do try it, Savita. It really makes you take an intense tour through your vocabulary! ! ! ! ! And for us word lovers, it's a lot of fun
Again Very Powerful And Effective Wording Here! ! ! ! ! .. Forgive me though, i don't think i follow on the ripple, and the exact... But, As Said, Your Words Are Ever So Powerful! ! ! ! ! ... As Always! ! ! ! ! ... Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Oh, the ripple thing is how the creator of this poetic form saw a reflection in a mirror- -distorted a little, reversed, not exact. Kind of like a mirror image in a fun house. Thus I wrote the reflection of the first tercet as- -] voice hectoring nastiness/face scowling / meanness.... instead of merely copying exactly the first tercet-
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/13/2024 3:54:04 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A very difficult form of poetry I think. and very impressive when delivered beautifully. very nice and magical piece. I shall come again to read and comment. It is very hard to absorb such beauty in words and lines RIPPLE MIRROR HAYNAKU. To MyPoemList.
Thank you for putting this effort on your fav list. I have found a few examples of this ripple mirror haynaku and find I need practice! ! ! It can indeed be a beautiful form of poetry but a bit difficult in the 2nd half. Thank you, my friend, for your supportive remarks! And I do like perching there on your fav list!