Rest In Peace Poem by Rini Shibu

Rest In Peace

Rating: 5.0


The tears cannot heal
the deep wound of the heart
The unbearable impulse
Which hurts every part

Wish if it squeeze
and ruptures the heart
Never again it will beat
to ache and start

Everything will stop
And the breath will be ceased
The body can forever
then rest in peace

Wednesday, June 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: peace
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2018

The breath will be ceased after the end of life and body will be ceased. Respective sou should rest in peace. Prayer should be offered to God...........10

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Robert Murray Smith 27 June 2018

Rini, a poem from the heart. ++10

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 June 2018

Hi Rini A poem from the depths of the heart. Expressing the anguish of the loss of a dear person, very heartfelt poetry. You are able to take the reader with you. A 10++

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Kostas Lagos 28 June 2018

The mystery of death as seen from those left behind.A strong effort! Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 May 2023

A heartfelt poem dear Rini....extremely well penned. Top score!

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Susheela Shiju- 15 October 2018

excellent Rini! well penned!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 June 2018

Why this sudden sadness in the poetry of a smiling poet let others rest as they are old smile on RJ at the very least May god be with de

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 June 2018

A poignant and heartfelt write. The loss of a dear one brings emptiness in one's heart. Well penned.10

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Akhtar Jawad 28 June 2018

Mourning death of a dear one, so nicely painted the human sentiments.

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