Restless Poem by Rini Shibu

Restless

Rating: 5.0


Restless when you are
And your heart is beating very hard
You are pacing to and fro
Thoughts are flashing so fast
Fear and anxiety are at the peak
Nothing you are able to speak
Are you right in others view
When things seem to go wrong
And life is at the edge of rock
Should quit or move on
In the end you will be alone

Tuesday, December 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fear,restlessness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 December 2017

The feelings of restlessness and fear are vividly portrayed in this beautifully crafted write. Great piece, Rini..10

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Rini Shibu 13 December 2017

Thanks Rose

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Lamar Cole 12 December 2017

This is a very thought invoking poem about restless.

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Rini Shibu 13 December 2017

Thanks for the comment lam

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 December 2017

Thoughts are flashing so fast with beats of heart restlessly and fear is amazingly expressed in this wisely penned poem. We hope fear will go far soon and happiness will come in life...10

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Rini Shibu 13 December 2017

We expect to have happiness always.. Thanks Kumar

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2017

A very creditable write Rini Appreciated

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Rini Shibu 13 December 2017

Thanks Dillip for your comment.. I appreciate it

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The Crow 12 December 2017

What will be, will be. Why worry Rini? .

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Rini Shibu 13 December 2017

Life is a mixture of happiness, tension a d sorrow, and every single moment is a reason for a new poem

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