The waves of life
toss and tumble
No rhyme,
only jumble
Giant waves
towering, swallowing.
Small ones
cowering below,
weighed down
by existence.
Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Life big ones swallowing the small ones and it's rhyme less, nicely written.10
The dramatics of life nicely expressed between the two poles of existence and struggle.10+++
This poem is as loud and traumatic as the tanka is quiet and reserved. You create a dramatic moment, leave it suspended and close the poem in h-o-p-e.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A mortal existence is always nonsense, sometimes life seems a byproduct or a product loss. A philosophic poem.