Riding On... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
Riding On...
Pretty old man age
beyond his ways
Flame like streaks
around his face
Wakes up each day
with a crimson face
Resumes routines
round domain
Rides in cart drawn
by mares unseen,
Seven shade face
theirs single seen...
20 10 08
Clear and brilliant imagery through out. Very well written. Very nice.
Kesav I really liked the feel of the poem. Evolved emotion, and a sense of the scene. Good writer!
resumes routine round domain...never a bored sun...lovely write sir...10
the theme and your use of the right amount of words makes this poem a memorable one....picturizing the sun as the 'old man' expresses how one should respect this life sustaining source....very nice...
The poem is so amazing in its beauty which is its simplicity. What a great way to picturise sun....wonderful u deserve a perfect10 for this. Thanks for the beautiful experience.
mattullavarkkaay swayam kathiyeriyunna susnehamoorthiyaam sooryaaa...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/8/2025 7:31:24 AM # 1.0.0
excellent excellent excellent..hats off!