"Knowing you are faithless keeps me alive and hungry.
Knowing you faithful would kill me with joy." Mirza Galib
Fleeting movements of time,
To fill them with your love
Such isn't my luck.
Yet in thoughts you are mine.
I lay no claim but to have a right to love
Independent of reciprocal demand.
In the heat of my heart's desire
It blooms like an evergreen flower.
Obsolete are now the crippling
Shadows of day and night.
Eternal is the memory of your visage
Accosting me around.
You, who are companion
Of my silent hours,
You, who guide my chariot
Till my last ride,
I put my life in your hands
To love you through the end.
The closure lines are very touching. The eternality and unconditional love have been vividly depicted and expressed. A great poem so beautifully written.
A poem of great depth. Powerful, touching and heartfelt. The words embedded in this write are so very true. The right to love is absolute. It could never be infringed even if it is not reciprocated.
I put my life in your hands To love you through the end......so touching with deep love. It is really a beautiful poem on true llove having nice penmanship. It is glad that it has been pulished in an Anthology of ‘Poets Unite Worldwide' in the name of the book ‘Spaces Of Mind'. Thank you dear madam for sharing this poem for the readers of PH.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lovely poem dear madam...Loved it