Right To Love Poem by Savita Tyagi

Right To Love

Rating: 5.0


"Knowing you are faithless keeps me alive and hungry.
Knowing you faithful would kill me with joy." Mirza Galib

Fleeting movements of time,
To fill them with your love
Such isn't my luck.
Yet in thoughts you are mine.

I lay no claim but to have a right to love
Independent of reciprocal demand.
In the heat of my heart's desire
It blooms like an evergreen flower.

Obsolete are now the crippling
Shadows of day and night.
Eternal is the memory of your visage
Accosting me around.

You, who are companion
Of my silent hours,
You, who guide my chariot
Till my last ride,
I put my life in your hands
To love you through the end.

Thursday, April 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: devotion,love,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The above poem is published in an Anthology of ‘Poets Unite Worldwide'. Name of the book ‘Spaces Of Mind'. Publisher Fabrizio Frosini.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 24 September 2021

A lovely poem dear madam...Loved it

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 April 2019

o the last stanza greatly touches me

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2019

The closure lines are very touching. The eternality and unconditional love have been vividly depicted and expressed. A great poem so beautifully written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2019

A poem of great depth. Powerful, touching and heartfelt. The words embedded in this write are so very true. The right to love is absolute. It could never be infringed even if it is not reciprocated.

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Savita Tyagi 11 April 2019

Thank you Rose for your positive comment. Appreciate it very much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 April 2019

I put my life in your hands To love you through the end......so touching with deep love. It is really a beautiful poem on true llove having nice penmanship. It is glad that it has been pulished in an Anthology of ‘Poets Unite Worldwide' in the name of the book ‘Spaces Of Mind'. Thank you dear madam for sharing this poem for the readers of PH.

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Savita Tyagi 11 April 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Ji for your kind comment and review.

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