Room Hope For My Beloved Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Room Hope For My Beloved

Rating: 4.6


Longing wings, gone and passed
Weak flapping, will go to pile the sense?
In an obstacles range, will not be lost
Although not one promise, keep eternal - definitely

Turmoil sense often sprawled
Kept moving, go through, no time to be doubt
Like fireflies in the darkness night
Splash the light, albeit dimly - certainly

Realities faint-sigh resignedly
Face's shadow pull over the logic of me
The spaces of hope, the nuances of sense
Flood spilled, filled the soul - oh, is this love?

Like the rainbow, you had been chosen
Morning's silhouette, iridescent
No regrets, despite not being
Because loving you is greatest gift - my beloved lady


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Angel 13 August 2013

A beautiful, lovely love poem

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Emily Angel 13 August 2013

A beautiful, serene love poem.

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Tribhawan Kaul 13 August 2013

This is a lovely poem. Love always do wonders. It is soulful. It is musical. It is hope.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 12 August 2013

A fine poem of imagination.

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Chandana Khan 12 August 2013

Like the rainbow, you had been chosen Morning's silhouette, iridescent No regrets, despite not being Because loving you is greatest gift - my beloved lady very nice poem.

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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

beautiful love poem so nicely presented

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Lauren C 14 August 2013

This was beautiful. I hope you keep writing

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Poetheart Morgan 14 August 2013

I think love must be described in that way, simple, sincere and strong. Very good, your Lady must be happy poet! !

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Yasmin Khan 14 August 2013

Love kindles the imagination and such beautiful lines are created. Fireflies in the dark and morning silhouettes are beautiful images.

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Shereen Ramadan 14 August 2013

nice images: D keep it up

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