Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 63,827 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Ruthie With The Sagging Drawers .... [inspired Poetry; Humour/Humor; Short; Tantalizing! ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

Down the street she swung her luscious hips,
which caused me, an onlooker, to wet my two lips.
It looked like she was going to drop her drawers,
which would have caused, I'm sure, many roars...
of approval from the construction workers up high,
and yet she just glanced at them and let out a SIGHHH......
of satisfaction.

Topic(s) of this poem: sexuality


Poet's Notes about The Poem

my good friend (on PH) Ruth Walters said PH always adds a 'p' to 'drop' to make it 'dropp'. SO i 'had to' test the truth of the statement. maybe it only happens to English members?

bri :)

Comments about Ruthie With The Sagging Drawers .... [inspired Poetry; Humour/Humor; Short; Tantalizing! ] by Bri Edwards

  • Khairul Ahsan (11/1/2015 1:50:00 AM)


    After many months I am reading a poem of yours and as usual, couldn't check my laughter.
    Thanks for the notes at the end.
    'SIGHHH......of satisfaction' - what was the satisfaction for?
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  • Kelly Kurt (10/24/2015 5:56:00 PM)


    They seem to capitalize the t after an apostrophe. I want a poem about that. : -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 24, 2015



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