look at the stars
so dim in the sky....
have you seen the moon?
it's a picture of a lonely face...
Yes the moon can appear thus to the lonely or sad, and gives strange comfort at needed times..... good short write.... a 10 from Fay.....
look at the stars so dim in the sky....moon is alone but gioves you so much coolness in return.. it is symbolic gesture on her part.. but the poem is so lovely wuth good rhythm and message....10
THE MOON IS INDEED A LONELY FACE! BUT ON A FULL MOON NIGHT IT BECOMES A LOVELY, BEAUTIFUL FACE! Various people view the moon in different ways! In a place without electricity, the moon provides its light! For the lovers and madman it has its own charm! But for the hungry and destitude of this world it is a vision of a rolled out bread! I have written a poem on the same! 10! - Raj Nandy
sometimes sadness take our breath out to think it over again and again.......I love the write it is absolutely a good picture of write.........
My Goddess, this is an absolute gem of a poem....one I can especially relate to at the moment....well done, such the talent
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Although this poem is all too brief, it is a very beautifully expressed and written poem, Lady Grace. It is certainly one of the very best short poems I have read in a good while! Carl.