Sailing To Eternity Poem by Rini Shibu

Sailing To Eternity

Rating: 5.0


The rise and fall of the tide
Drifts the Yacht towards the destination
You are at the helm
and compass is in your hand
Move forward to the desired direction
The sea may get rough and wild
The weather may fickle
A heavy gust may hit the boat
And may get seasick due to heavy rolling waves
The thought of dreadful storm may make
the sail impossible
But unless there is courage
To leave the shore
You will never discover new
ocean and land

Sunday, September 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: destination,eternity,journey,sailing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2017

But unless there is courage To leave the shore You will never discover new ocean and land... great theme. Beautiful poem on destination wisely shared. Thanks. Full vote.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 September 2022

A fantastic poem dear Rini... extremely well penned. Top score and to my favourite! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2018

Hi Rini, A very provocative poem: But unless there is courage To leave the shore You will never discover new ocean and land Very positive. Well Done. Well-worded!

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

We should take risk in life.. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

The tide of life! ! To be at the side of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 10 September 2017

Thanks for reading this poem Edward.. Rini

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Ash Adetayo 05 September 2017

With just a few lines you have shared a great poem...

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Rini Shibu 05 September 2017

Thanks for your comments Ash

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Lamar Cole 03 September 2017

This is a great poem showing the great need for courage.

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Rini Shibu 05 September 2017

Thanks for reading this poem lam

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