Salvation Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Salvation

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SALVATION
PoemBy DPN

How long have I been waiting for you here on this threshold
Curses on my slumber I fell into just before you appeared
I could feel the warmth of your breath on my forehead
By the time I woke up and opened my eyes you disappeared

The sound of your steps is vibrating my strings playing melodies
My heart is dancing to the tune of that music in extreme ecstasies
Come, grant me the boon I have been longing for in all my births
Pour into this bowl I hold before thee a drop of bliss fromthy heavens

Tickled by the playful sea breeze the green leaves jiggle and
The stir appears to me as the sound of your approaching steps
Their broken whispers sounds like your calling me in gentle voice
My poor heart beats faster eager to catch sight of your charming form

Like the drop of water that rolls downstream to join the sea afar
My soul has been in incessant journey to reach thy blissful realms
My thirst for dissolving in you is formidable, greet this little drop too
Into thytranquil sea of sacred truth, eternal peace and sublime beauty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayachandran C Nair; 10 December 2018

Presentation coherently is stupendous

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Thank you Jayachandran for the comments

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Thank you Jayachandran for the commrnts

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Reetha Antony 28 September 2018

Om shanthi...shanthi...shanthi.

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Thank you Reetha. Let Peace prevail

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 November 2021

Beautiful poetic expression! Very touching and heartfelt lines. The ultimate stanza is stunning. To my Poem List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 February 2021

My heart is dancing to the tune of that music in extreme ecstasies....delightful expression! A lovely poem sir.....top score.

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Date & Time: 7/3/2020 5: 39: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 53109118 - Salvation Member: Bharati NayakComment: Like the drop of water that rolls downstream to join the sea afar My soul has been in incessant journey to reach thy blissful realms My thirst for dissolving in you is formidable, greet this little drop too Into thy tranquil sea of sacred truth, eternal peace and sublime beauty - - - - - - -Beautiful poem.

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Comment: Like the drop of water that rolls downstream to join the sea afar My soul has been in incessant journey to reach thy blissful realms My thirst for dissolving in you is formidable, greet this little drop too Into thy tranquil sea of sacred truth, eternal peace and sublime beauty - - - - - - -Beautiful poem.

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Bharati Nayak 03 July 2020

Like the drop of water that rolls downstream to join the sea afar My soul has been in incessant journey to reach thy blissful realms My thirst for dissolving in you is formidable, greet this little drop too Into thy tranquil sea of sacred truth, eternal peace and sublime beauty - - - - - - -Beautiful poem.

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