SATINSUNSET….
while walking to the emerald meadows
this morn
I see no silent shadows
the tulips as dutch as holland
have in its smell a certain blend
is it perfume or ordinary fresh air?
As you may know, our best friend comes from Bel Air
like Joseph in his returning dreams
I see now things what may not seem
but this morn is too sparkling
not to discover God
on my walking spot,
see and observe the whistling waves
the swaying streams, and all other red-brown rimpling paves
while walking forth to the emerald meadows
so noisy have become the silent shadows
the birds and the busy bunny-bees
hastening to their own favourite trees
slowly on darkening daylight is drowning
behind the soft satin veils
the sun smiles softly tenderly as he appeals
the smiling sunbeams
gets his glorious golden red dreams....
© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Friday 24 July 2020 - soft tiny raindrips
Really it is a poignant piece of work. with many poetic imagery, penned from the trustful heart. kind regards keep writing and stay blessed 10/10
At this morning you have not seen the waking shadows in the emerald meadows. But still you have perceived the fresh and perfumed ordinary air in special manner by grace of God. You have interestingly felt God's presence. Sun smiles softly and tenderly. The whistling waves you have heard from stream. At this time of sunset you have felt the interesting smiling sunbeams. An excellent natural imagery is drawn...10
Oh, Wow! .. Is all I can say, Please keep writing of such beauty and heart as this! .. Endless Stars! ..+++++ And May God Bless! ..
Simply amazing and truly breath taking! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++ And Definite to Favs! ..
Ever such deeply incredible beauty and feel painted and described all the way through this! ..
Like Joseph in his returning dreams I now see things what may not seem but this morning is too sparkling not to discover God! .. +++++++++++
The cover photograph is splendid. We love such nice natural photographs captured by your kind self.
Very relaxing poem. It almost put me to sleep. Thank you!