Satyawati -32 Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Satyawati -32

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32. Vanaprastha- Retiring to the Forests

Retiring to the forests
Is a practice followed
In the old age by members
Of the royal family.

Some people welcome death
By totally abstaining from food
Living just on water alone,
While others await a natural death.

When I took the decision
Ambika and Ambalika confided
They had already decided
To join me on Vanaprastha.

Devabrata, Dhritarashtra
The ministers and citizens
Even the young princes
Wanted us to stay back.

Vidura, with his eyes moist
Accepted whole-heartedly
His mother having joined us
Asked his wife to accompany.

He was privy to the conflict
Betwixt the Dhartarashtrans
And the Pandavas; the fire
His wisdom could not douse.

Renouncing all royal comforts
Devoid of the coterie of servants
Living on roots, fruit and leaves
We now await the inevitable,

Totally distanced from this world
And the horrible war in the offing
Without disturbing the peace,
Sanity and sanctity of the forest.

Tuesday, December 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 16 October 2018

Oh wow, ever so heart moving and beautifully told! .. Deeply enchanting, through every page that did unfold! .. :) Reminds me of some of the storybooks my Dad would read to me! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing these! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 October 2018

Hi Becca, This series draws from the story thread of epic Mahabharata. The story narrated here is the background on which the entire epic is built. Hope you have read the story of Mahabharata in some form....

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Susan Williams 16 July 2018

Retiring from the battlefield- -should we or shouldn't we? Weary of life, weary from aging, should our wise old heads remove themselves or stay and hope by their hard-earned wisdom to guide and protect the peoples from themselves? A very difficult question that in the end they alone can decide.... this epic story has led me down many difficult paths- this might be the hardest. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 October 2018

Thank you Susie for reading this pretty long series and staying with me. Obliged. Obliged for your kindness in favouring me with the invaluable remarks.

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Sekharan Pookkat 19 December 2017

An exemplary work- continue - my regards and 10++too

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 April 2018

Sir, How do I thank you for following this series. Obliged. Obliged for your appreciation of my attempt.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 12 December 2017

I have been reading all 32 poems of Satyawati Series.out standing are the all. The poetic project will highlight our literary heriatge in a modern form before the world. I loved them.

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 April 2018

Hi Binay, Thank you for following this series. The story should be well known to you. My narrative, you have been able to put up with! Obliged.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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