Save Your Only Land. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Save Your Only Land.

Rating: 5.0

In the dreary
Somber night
Thoughts become
Your only light,
And you try
To get away
Wanting to throw
Fists of sand
As you see
Your own
Birthland,
Being strangled,
And just withering
Away!
Hoping, Praying,
That Light's way,
Is still possible
Some day
And not very far
Away!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 07 September 2024

"….. still possible /Some day And not very far" this positive thoughts and energy sees us through all the world of hatred

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 September 2024

An exceptional poem so beautifully expressed. To my favorites.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 September 2024

Everyone who loves their motherland deeply could very well relate to this great poem. I join you in your prayers and hope for all countries that are suffering from the same circumstances.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 September 2024

A beautiful and heartfelt poem on love of country adorned with great imagery and deep poetic expressions. Very touching.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 September 2024

Bravo Sandra Really enjoyed it TFS

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Anjandev Roy 07 September 2024

Brilliant piece......as usual...... thanks for sharing.....

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