Entering a dark tunnel
I see these monkeys
that were human beings in the past
but some sophisticated weapon
struck them,
affected them badly,
turned them into new creatures
Now they are fighting another creature-
half boar
the other half wolf -
for control of a field of apples
watermelon sized,
genetically modified,
watered with black water
And those who are in charge
are flying through the sky
on jet boards
inhabiting space
When I realized
it was not the place for me there
I got out
Then I remembered
I am still in the twentieth century
and calm returns to me as before
Then I woke up from this
awful nightmare!
An insightful poem with a great message to humanity. The greediness of mankind can be seen in the technology that they created.They want to rule the world and amass so much wealth by changing human condition and features leading to moral degradation.
Dear Poet Hans Vr We hope that the world will be safe and sweet with the compassion and humanity of mankind as you see it, but unfortunately over all the power of evil dominates man in the world, and the Corona pandemic is nothing but a product of man-made in laboratories, and this is an example of the scientific creatures mentioned in this poem, thank you For reading and your comment..
Intriguing poem. A bleak future in a dreadful dream. We are still in the right century and every kind act can make our world a bit brighter. I am dreaming of a world filled with kindness. All it takes it to have enough people performing a kind act every day, :) ...
part 1 / Dear Rose, hello and thanks... honestly because of luck of comment I tried to deactivate this poem some times ago, but I was believing in the strength in it, even with the first read it looks little odd you are one of the unique poet who can discover the gem in the shallow water, rarely people give their attention to read this poem,
part 2 / but it is so creativity piece of work, mixing the the imagination into reality to make a new poetic image in order to say: There will be a time when this nightmare will come to existence (such as Corona virus) if mankind will not be controlled in creating things that could destroy the moral fiber of society.
There will be a time when this nightmare will come to existence if mankind will not be controlled in creating things that could destroy the moral fiber of society. A one of a kind unique write. Well crafted with great imagery as always.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wolf! ! A dark tunnel, Nightmare! ! ! Ways of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Dear Poet Edward... we need more humanity and moral for our planet, otherwise the world will change badly...thanks for your comment