Beach Girl

Sea Foam - Poem by Beach Girl

Running up the beach I stopped
And then I turned to see
Footprints filled up to tiptop
With foam the sea emptied

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  • The Poet Poet (6/7/2018 9:42:00 PM)

    AND I love beaches too so many poetry I have composed too the surf washed away my feet but engraved a memory Go to beaches any where and see lovelier more lovelier faces with glee makes me happy come to the rich mans beach and see for yourself gals and guys making merry (Report) Reply

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  • Bri Edwards (7/15/2015 11:21:00 PM)

    FINALLY! i found one i haven't read. nice.

    one suggestion: change line #4 to:

    Into which the sea did pee.
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  • Kevin East (8/14/2013 7:02:00 AM)

    nice are unique. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (8/13/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    Short but beautiful! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 22, 2013

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