Eyan Desir

Sea Of Hate!


Monster! he took the life
waters from her heart
on the coral reef
vessels of his sweet crimes rest.

With a vindictive rage
a vicious tidal wave
over flows my heart's gate

The sea of love is dead!
it has been contaminated
with waters of hatred

With the might of a hurricane!
and a destructive blade
my sea comes to make
the vines from his heart

Don't asked for mercy!
the sea of love is dead!
It's time to meet your maker
go to hell with your prayers!


Play with fire and get burned!
provoking a mortal soul
means invoking its evil
and unleashing demons
Living in its chest!

Buckets of laughter
escapes from my mouth
as the sea of hate
smashes! the light from his heart

Poem Submitted: Friday, March 12, 2010
Poem Edited: Monday, May 9, 2011

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  • Brittany Jones (5/10/2010 12:20:00 AM)

    nice pace to your poem
    keep up the rhythm and good work

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (3/19/2010 5:44:00 PM)

    my sea comes to make
    the vines from his heart


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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (3/15/2010 10:38:00 AM)

    'The sea of love is dead!
    it has been contaminated
    with waters of hatred'...

    liked this stanza more...well, how can love thrive in the dead (hatred) sea?
    good poem...very much emotionally expressive

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  • Janell Cressman (3/14/2010 6:42:00 PM)

    this one is intersting, and that is all i can seem to say about it

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  • Lady Grace (3/14/2010 6:08:00 PM)

    this piece is expressing strong emotion or expresses hard feelings...nicely done.expresssive...

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  • ~Heart of Ice~ ¢♦ ¢♦ ¢ (3/13/2010 9:45:00 AM)

    this is the most amazing wonderufl well expressed beautifully evil poem i have read in an extremely long time. it's refreshing, let me tell. i love the way you make the words fit together, like life's just one big puzzle and ur putting it together. love it.

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