Life one day turned cross with me;
Knew not what went wrong where I lied
My faulty words? Indiscreet deeds?
Things no rosy;
To find out why
I pondered over each x and y
Spent many a day thus thinking why
Days came and left, returned yawning
My search still on; years passing by…
23 08 08
That's the story of my life... Reminds me of a Pink Floyd song called comfortably Numb
cool poem kesav, i really liked the way you portrayed the dilemma most of us face in life through this poem. please read my poem 'the eternal search', both seems to speak in the same vein for me.
such a lovely and thought provoking poem. i loved the terms X & Y that you have used here. excellent and surely a 10.
I pondered over each x and y Spent many a day thus thinking why Rachel Ann Butler
Life is full of uncertainties as we sail across the ocean of intricacy...but as we go on, we came to understand a lot if not all, and that's what we call maturity. Brilliant as ever, my dear friend! :)
looks like iam in the same boat as you...very well written
why O why! i relate this poem to me cause it rsembles my feelings...it surely is a great write with depths hidden in those few beautiful lines and this poem ges in my fav. too thank you for sharing this wonderful work kesav...10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When I started reading this poem immediately I could relate it to me. So many may feel the same. The essesce of writing poetry I think lies in such wonderful revelations of life! ! Thans Sir for sharing this.