Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 396,536 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

See This Dawn - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

See this dawn is entirely lovely
Having so many colours of rays
This dawn sings to teach us love
Having every moment is special.

Mind seems and thinks daily why?
Why does this dawn comes and goes?
Why wonder lies within to scribble?
We think, think and think everyday.

But the super painter is very clever
He gives alerts through loving dawn
All to rise with rise of sun so far
We travel to our destinations more.

Like birds at dawn we search purpose
Like rays we like to light life ever
This is very interesting to listen
Mind revives in faith of God, you see.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, morning, nature


Comments about See This Dawn by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • (9/7/2016 4:24:00 PM)

    Each waking dawn, life is renewed in a special way thru colors of lovely rays and song.
    Beautiful words and images, you paint the dawn so well. But the 'super painter' is more clever still, knowing how thru color and light arouse his creatures for a full participation in life's dawn, every morn. I like the vision of the super creator very much, it reminds me of Michelangelo's painting in the Sistine Chapel of God giving Adam his
    breath of life.
    You're beautiful poem incites waking up to a beautifully colored dawn. A well merited 10
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  • Susan Williams (9/7/2016 3:50:00 PM)

    Like birds at dawn we search purpose- - - - - - that is a jewel of a line! ! ! ! It is so exhilarating to write a perfect line, isn't it? ? ! ! ! I wholeheartedly agree with the message of this poem- -we really must endeavor to open our eyes and our souls to the glory of the world we live in! 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (9/6/2016 8:59:00 PM)

    Like birds at dawn we search purpose
    Like rays we like to light life ever
    This is very interesting to listen
    Mind revives in faith of God, you see.
    So beautiful.
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  • (9/6/2016 3:03:00 PM)

    Communication with one's God. Sometimes the creation of a poem seems like that. And the Dawn image emphasizes the renewal of Faith and restores our senses. It is a very fine poem and I shall add it to my favourites'
    list, Kumarmani.
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  • V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy (9/6/2016 8:56:00 AM)

    search the purpose of your existence awakening dear poet, live wisely fantastic message perfect 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (9/5/2016 1:09:00 PM)

    Outstanding Poem....so refreshing and meaningful.....We definitely look for the purpose in life each and everyday by fine tuning our wishes....and our life gets enlightened by the sunrays everyday....and our mind, as you rightly said enchants the faith of Almighty......Deep and profound poem...100+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/5/2016 5:04:00 AM)

    Entirely lovely! ! Nice piece of work. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 4, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, September 5, 2016


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