Geetha Jayakumar

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See You! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

See you in a short while
For its a call of time
For I am slave of time
I can never refuse its call.
For its an order from lovely princess of time!

I often play hide and seek
I go on and off
If I am breathing in
I am sure to knock in you door!
See you in short while!

I met you somewhere
At some point of time
So far it was a
wonderful poetic journey
Travelled along with you
With sweet and bitter rhymes
In course of time.

On my journey towards my destination
A stop arrived in course of time.
It asked me to get down for a while.

Catch you in a while
When this journey,
Again comes my way,
Again when it will stop my way
I am sure to get in!

Life has many stops
On its way towards destination.
you may get down
you may not
No choice left for final stop!

Till then bye for a week
Enjoy your wonderful weekly ride of poetic journey
With melodious song, dance and music
Thereby hunting for treasure innumerable in measures
Enjoy the beauty of life singing
Christmas and New Year songs
On Chills of winter,
Listen to your echo in snow covered mountain
Snow will melt on hearing your echo of love.

Enjoy the bountiful scenery that we are blessed with
Enjoy the beauty of life
Looking through the window of musical poems.
See you in a short while from now!

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Note. See you are after a short break!

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Comments about See You! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/25/2019 3:16:00 PM)

    We always have temporary break and temporary separation still scribble mind. But in breath of life still we have hope to meet somewhere. Enjoying the bountiful scenery is definitely very nice. An excellent poem is nicely penned...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (4/10/2015 11:07:00 PM)

    Another beautiful poem - life with its beautiful stops, pauses and wayside entertainment till the final destination. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/27/2015 9:16:00 PM)

    Nice lines...Enjoy the bountiful scenery that we are blessed with
    Enjoy the beauty of life....10

    What makes me to wonder?
    And thrill under
    Such a nice spell
    Verbally I can’t express or tell

    There is magnetic pull
    That keeps me cheerful
    I read your creation
    And float under its recreation
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  • Unwritten Soul (12/14/2014 1:29:00 AM)

    Beautiful write! again from you_Soul (Report)Reply

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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (12/7/2014 7:51:00 AM)

    I love this prompt wish as sweet a prayer. (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (12/4/2014 11:08:00 AM)

    I met you somewhere at some point in time so far it was a wonderful poetic journey traveled along with you with sweet and bitter rhymes in course of time beautiful thought (Report)Reply

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  • (12/4/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    No choice left for final stop.......A beautifully composed poem and meaningful of life it gives. likes it. (Report)Reply

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  • Savita Tyagi (12/1/2014 10:33:00 AM)

    Lovely composition! Enjoy your break! You will bring rhythm and beauty in whatever you are doing and wherever your journey is taking you. Loved your style. (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (11/24/2014 5:54:00 AM)

    So beautiful Geetha... I think of you often and certainly will do over the festive season. Thank you x (Report)Reply

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  • Rajesh Thankappan (11/17/2014 9:11:00 AM)

    The motion of the poem was that of hustling time. Nice composition. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/15/2014 5:04:00 PM)

    I am sure to knock in you door!
    See you in short while! Excellent composition. Each line makes feeling of suitable realization. Enjoying beauty, with Christmas songs and watching snow covered mountains really gives one brief account of nature. That is why it is necessary to see for a while to nature's beauty. Excellent poem shared.
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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/14/2014 10:36:00 PM)

    See you in a short while For its a call of time thank you (Report)Reply

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  • Tribhawan Kaul (11/14/2014 12:51:00 AM)

    What a poetic way to say a temporary goodbye! Simply beautiful 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (11/13/2014 3:17:00 PM)

    Enjoy the bountiful scenery that we
    are blessed with
    Enjoy the beauty of life
    Looking through the window of
    musical poems.
    See you in a short while from now!
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  • Amitava Sur (11/13/2014 12:18:00 AM)

    A lovely poetic way to take a leave. Wish you enjoy your holidays in peace with some more poems being rich.
    Loved it Geetha.
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  • (11/9/2014 5:09:00 AM)

    A sweet and lovely poem.......10 (Report)Reply

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  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (11/8/2014 6:30:00 PM)

    I often play hide and seek
    I go on and off
    If I am breathing in
    I am sure to knock in you door!
    See you in short while!
    Excellent stanza. Very meaningful. The entire poem shines with fine touch of your thoughts. Very nicely penned.
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  • Alesia Leach (11/8/2014 2:40:00 PM)

    A wonderfully penned poem about life's journey and time. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/7/2014 12:47:00 PM)

    Phenomenal write with touching words indeed....Geetha......outstanding (Report)Reply

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  • Saheb Mohapatra (11/7/2014 5:54:00 AM)

    extraordinary poem with thoughts that i salute honestly........thanks (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, November 7, 2014


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