Send Me The Fixed Moon Comments

A thought provoking poem. The penultimate stanza invokes darkness. Beautifully crafted and well executed write. Congratulations, Julian for a well deserved POD.

This is wonderful poetry written using extraordinary imagination. Enjoyed thoroughly. Congrats on being chosen as POD.

A highly imaginative poem so nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

'No, he will not hear you when dawn' I don't understand that line in the third stanza. You do portray the sense of being lost.

brilliantly penned- Shine is beauty, ..light is the truth ..I'll pick none ..I am lost, my mind floats in the cosmos ..So give me the mocking jay, and I'll send you the fixed moon. /// excellently penned life in lost

Julian, such a marvelous poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen...................

Light is the truth! ! Wisdom! Light to the world. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A good start with a nice poem, Julian C. C. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

Thanks Chinedu, your comment motivates me. Take care

Good rendition of words nice brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Julian and do remain enriched.