Senryu # 04 Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Senryu # 04

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Clock counts step of vein
Teaches to take breath in well
Live in punctual


- May 22,2018 Chittagong, Bangladesh

Thursday, May 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Britte Ninad 14 August 2018

wo excellent and brilliant you pen

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Kelly Kurt 08 July 2018

Now, every succeeding one, is all there is.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2018

Time never comes back, love it with punctuality. A senryu with a great message.

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