Senryu - 128 Smooth Departure - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 128 Smooth Departure -

Rating: 5.0


With a leaden heart
not a word spoken just kissed
to keep the heart warm

Saturday, April 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: departure,longing,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abderrahmane Dakir 02 April 2016

Nice poem about the love. thank you M.Asim Nehal for sharing.

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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Wonderful poem 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 April 2016

Longing! ! With love and life. Nice work.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 April 2016

nicely expressed and so true thanks Asim-10

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Nosheen Irfan 11 April 2016

A farewell is always heavy but a kiss can make it less unbearable. Nicely expressed.

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Kelly Kurt 02 April 2016

A goodbye kiss must sometimes keep our hearts warm for a long time

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