Senryu - 17 (Concave Love) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 17 (Concave Love)

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Straight, as the crow flies
your love crashed into my heart
I am in deep sea.

M. Asim Nehal
Sunday, September 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2015

Wonderful imagery. A beautiful poem having deep speculation. Thanks for sharing.....10

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Thank u so so much....

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Jaishree Nair 13 September 2015

A haiku with such a deep meaning .wonderful .thanks

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Thanks a lot Ms. Jaishree.

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Sanjukta Nag 13 September 2015

An exclusive use of imagery.. i'm astounded.. and the last line made me speechless. this poem is beyond any rating.

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Darren Jkoeryo 02 February 2021

Totally fallen in love.

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 31 October 2015

Another lovely Senryu Dorothy Singing Still

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Bri Edwards 23 October 2015

i 'loved' the first two lines, though i generally do not aim toward love poems if i can help it! BUT the third line threw me. what does it mean, i wonder. i haven't come up with an answer. bri :)

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Sofia Kioroglou 05 October 2015

That's an amazing poem.Beautiful imagery dear!

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Akhtar Jawad 25 September 2015

A concave lens may be a convex on on the other side, view depends on the combined focal length of two sides.

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