Valsa George

Senryu.3. Blackhole - Poem by Valsa George

In the sunlit plain
Of all minds is a black hole
Where scalded dreams lie

Topic(s) of this poem: dreams

Comments about Senryu.3. Blackhole by Valsa George

  • Jez Brul (4/7/2018 5:41:00 PM)

    This is such a brilliant philosophical senryu...our minds are the fountain of all dreams...never ending...never ceasing...mysterious and fathomless! 10 plus and to my poem list.❤️❤️❤️ (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/13/2016 5:31:00 AM)

    and burst and spread all round
    on a big bang,
    we see our dreams have changed their shapes,
    enough flexible to be fulfilled.
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  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (11/10/2015 1:03:00 AM)

    True. only you could write this way... I have plenty of black holes. No matter what you write,5 lines.3 liner,2 liner,1 liner or just two words, i'm sure to find lyrics in there. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (11/9/2015 10:56:00 PM)

    Good Senryu! My epilogue:

    An ashen blackhole
    Filled with cinders and embers
    Which burn deep and hurt
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/8/2015 8:23:00 AM)

    Very true, Nicely written.....Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/8/2015 3:16:00 AM)

    Exactly. Beautiful expression. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 4:52:00 AM)

    In dreams mind bloom like expression of black hole. Very fascinating expression of fantastic nature. Wise sharing really.10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2015 12:14:00 AM)

    great write on dreams not fulfilled
    thanks Valsa-10
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  • Rajnish Manga (11/6/2015 11:47:00 PM)

    Psychoanalytical thought about our dream-world expressed beautifully in the poem. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/6/2015 10:17:00 PM)

    We all have such an inner place (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015

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