Senryu.2. Glassware Poem by Valsa George

Ah me! What happened? Hope it is only some glassware broken.

Dreams are like exquisite pieces of glassware unless they encounter the harsh realities of life only to be smashed into bits. What a nice poem. Thanks.

This is how I feel. Wonderfully written

Sad but I know it's not true. Well thought out and expressed.-10

Superb, Great imagery and nice thought but sad ending...I liked it.

A vivid depiction of shattered dreams and hard life in just three brilliant lines. Deeply poignant yet beautifully crafted senryu.

Verily, a lovely three liner narrating the depth of feeling.....10

Oh valsa! hope not. Those three lines did bleed me. Read it three times.

This is the feeling of a person so nicely depicted. Beautiful poem....10

Nice poem. A lot of thanks to you. Be well always.