Senryu 33 (Freedom Of Soul) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 33 (Freedom Of Soul)

Rating: 5.0


To set your soul free
Put your heart and mind
To what you do.

Tuesday, June 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: work
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2020

Inner freedom matters a lot and we should feel every positive breath in life. We should grow with standard and perception of positive breath. This poem is very nice and lovely. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 June 2020

bu what can one do who was like PPME born soul- free only sole ma'am abs OF SOUL FREE A SOLE

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Khairul Ahsan 19 June 2020

An original thought brilliantly expressed in the form of a senryu. If we put our heart and mind to what we do, our soul is set free - what a wonderful perception of life and soul! The Senryu gets 10/10 from me.

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Valsa George 18 June 2020

Yes, that is the most effective way to set one's mind free of all disturbing thoughts! A great haiku!

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Unless you put your heart and mind in your deeds peace will keep in abeyance. Excellent senryu

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 June 2020

superb senryu.......wisdom.......nice to read......

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 June 2020

keep the mind Set free from other clutch leave the greed don't make remote control to be hypnotized or to do so!

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