Senryu 34 Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 34

Rating: 4.4


Poetry- my rapt
Pause, while the world around me
Moves in a mad rush.

Sunday, September 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 20 September 2020

Brilliant. Taking time for self is something one should do often.5 Stars Savitaji.

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Susan Williams 29 September 2020

Oh! I love a senryu in the hands of a true poet! ! ! I love the pause- -it works especially in context with the poem. And the image and message are spot on! Top marks!

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Great Haiku on poetry. Top score

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 October 2020

Poetry Original Infinity The analogy of the universe On the way to the whim

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Bri Edwards 23 October 2020

1 - " adjective: rapt " Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5,7,5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions." (cont.)

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Suresh Kumar Ek 07 November 2020

A meditational poem Thanks SavithaJi

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Budhashaya Behera 31 October 2020

Devotional poetry gives us immense joy. We can move ahead with greater joy, if we chant Lord's name. Hare Krishna..Hare Krishna.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 October 2020

It's beauty and peace that inspires a poet. A poet is a human and he is also affected by the current affairs. A nice poem.

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Definitely dear poetess, while the worls around us is madly rushing poets in us take a pause

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Bharati Nayak 24 October 2020

Poetry- my rapt Pause, while the world around me Moves in a mad rush. - - -A beautiful Haiku, loved it.

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