on the shore of life
smoke of the caravan floats
sun dips in ocean
Wow so well, so well , Love it on the shore of life smoke of the caravan floats sun dips in ocean
Beautiful fascinating Senryu, Asim Sir! A 10++++++for the Senryu. I always enjoy your verses, poems, Haiku and Senryu!
Coasts! ! Coats and boats; Life's journey. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Sun dips in ocean......profound piece......thank u.....anjandev roy.
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A meaningful senryu insightfully crafted. What floats in life journey is the smoky dust of the caravan....10