M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,218 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 80 (Your Attraction) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

In your attraction
mind goes hostile and wage war
with days and the nights

Topic(s) of this poem: love, love and friendship

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 80 (Your Attraction) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Hazel Durham (12/3/2015 7:43:00 AM)


    The turmoil that our mind wages war with days and nights, great write! (Report) Reply

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  • (11/14/2015 3:57:00 AM)


    and sometimes with ourselves
    thanks Asim
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/14/2015 12:36:00 AM)


    God's creation ever attracts us in love and affection through which we do friendship. Nice sharing....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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