M. Asim Nehal

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Senryu - 85 Your Beauty - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

ocean waves frozen
by your beauty and a smile
and sea diminishes.

Topic(s) of this poem: god, nature

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 85 Your Beauty by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/24/2015 10:53:00 AM)

    Beauty of God well thought, Asim. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2015 7:18:00 AM)

    Beauty and smile of sea draw interesting imagery in this tiny poem. Fantastic haiku shared here definitely. Wise sharing....10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/24/2015 12:05:00 AM)

    A lovely haiku. Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 23, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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