M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,172 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu - 86 Ideas - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Grey field of the mind
surrounded by ideas
the rain must come now.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 86 Ideas by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/15/2016 1:00:00 AM)

    To water the earth! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Kewayne Wadley (11/30/2015 3:06:00 PM)

    Nicely told in just a few words!
    Imaginative! The thoughts that come flooding in.
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  • (11/26/2015 7:06:00 AM)

    Superb Haiku, nicely put on, Asim God bless u. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/26/2015 3:37:00 AM)

    Well envisioned. Beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/26/2015 12:37:00 AM)

    A brainstorm. Thanks, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/26/2015 12:32:00 AM)

    A brilliant Haiku Asim.. Really, really beautiful the way you expressed the idea in this one.. Thanks for sharing.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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