Senryu - 86 Ideas Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 86 Ideas

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Grey field of the mind
surrounded by ideas
the rain must come now.

Senryu - 86   Ideas
Thursday, November 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 26 November 2015

A brilliant Haiku Asim.. Really, really beautiful the way you expressed the idea in this one.. Thanks for sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

To water the earth! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Kewayne Wadley 30 November 2015

Nicely told in just a few words! Imaginative! The thoughts that come flooding in. KW

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T Rajan Evol 26 November 2015

Superb Haiku, nicely put on, Asim God bless u.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2015

Well envisioned. Beautiful haiku. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 26 November 2015

A brainstorm. Thanks, Mohammed

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